Your First Five Pages: Quick Writing Checkup

You have five pages to prove you’re a writer with commercial potential. Be sure you avoid the common mistakes of new writers: point-of-view switches, logic holes, overwriting, murkiness, passive voice, excess exposition, repetitions, stilted language, and overuse of adverbs and adjectives.

Send us the first five pages of your manuscript to review. We’ll e-mail an evaluation citing strengths and weaknesses, with specific examples and suggestions for your next steps.

Don’t be bewildered! An objective review can get you moving toward fantastic fiction writing.

Cost: $US55.

Let’s get started:

1. E-mail Us About Your Book

2. We’ll send you information about how to submit your five pages and payment.

3. We begin the work as soon as we get your file and payment.

4. We e-mail your review within five days.

Should you opt for a full manuscript review, we will credit the $55 fee.